For writing we got a picture to look at and describe then we got four sentences that were terrible sentences. We had to then take those sentences and make them into good sentences.
Here are the bad sentences
It is nighttime
A boy walks on a road
He sees a figure
He feel happy
Here is my new Story.
Look into his eyes
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